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I wouldn’t want to live there with that light.  tone it down a bit, and make it a little more white.  The outside scene looks like you are trying to light it with a dark blue sky.  Keep in mind that just because the sky is dark blue, doesn’t mean everything reflects it like that.  The outside should look more black, and you should use softer lights.
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Also, If you weant to improve, then please listen to me.
Quality is better than quanity.  Try working on a scene for more than a week, I know you must be anxious to move on, but make a perfect scene, and integrate everything you learned, and it will look a lot better, trust me.



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Also, I hate to point this out, and I definitely don’t want to start any fights, but read this:
http://area.autodesk.com/for...el-thread-closed/Page-10/
Notice how he didn’t listen when he was getting free valuble advice from proffesionals in that field (Not implying that I am a proffesional in ANY way).  Get what I’m saying?  I can’t strees enough how important it is to practice and spend time on one scene.  So just try it.  Also, try modeling something a couple times in a row, because practice makes perfect.  There are also a billion tutorials out there, and many on this site.  It looks like you are just going your own way, when you could be learning from pros.  Trust me, they help.  They show workflows and techniques you probably never even knew about.  Please listen to me.  Again, I am not trying to start an argument, but I just see a lot of potential.  Keep up the good work.



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I agree with the previous input. You should put all effort on a large-scale project. You should consolidate the foundation instead of doing some small projects as well. It’s very important. :)



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 14 January 2009 04:08 AM

Thank you all, i will listen to all your advice (and work with them)

i wont argue with anything since i admit that i have been going on my own and doing small projects, all what you have said is true :-) ill try to make this scene look a lot better (with thanks to all your advice)

Thank you again.



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 15 January 2009 08:37 AM

OK i have done some improvements to the house and i have ran out of ideas.

i added some new furniture, pictures and other stuff, i also made the light outside the house “very dark blue”, and decreased the intensity of the lights in the house

any more ideas are appreciated any advice is also appreciated

Thanks.



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I think you should focus on interior instead of exterior. Create a walk-through animation if you like.



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 16 January 2009 02:52 AM

about that....there is something wrong with my software; it prevents me from doing animations; every time i try to do one the program shuts down…



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THAT WOULD BE VERY TRAGIC. It would hinder your learning progress! I suggest you to post a thread and ask for solution. :)



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 16 January 2009 08:48 AM

i thought about that once, but i realized that im not that interested in animation, im more into modeling than animating the model it self



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Even if you want to move on to animation, it’s better for you to have more further drilling exercise on modeling. (me too! :D)



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