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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 23 September 2008 11:16 AM

Thanks for the notes… i dont even know what is the purpose of the scene, as I said its random :P



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Your scene dated 9-16-2008 with the sink is an improvement as Longboarder1 has mentioned your work is improving.  To further improve that one, I’d suggest fixing the faucet and creating rounded edges on the sink.  The edges appear as if it could slice your fingers open - you want rounded/smoothed edges.



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RedCobra 23 September 2008 02:16 PM

Thanks for the notes… i dont even know what is the purpose of the scene, as I said its random :P

Ha ha - I took your comment as a scene randomly selected from your collection.



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I say go for quality and not quanity.  In the 20 something scenes you posted here, you should choose one and really focus your efforts on it.  Work on learning new stuff, and you scenes will look a ton better.



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 25 September 2008 06:33 PM

This is my latest test...it’s a test for refraction and reflection, Im concentration on the bowl nothing els.
here is my scene
and i want the glass to look as the scene under mine or even better if u guys can help me
(my scene is the one containing a torus knot)



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 26 September 2008 05:53 PM

i have done these scenes lately and i want to post them at once...all comments are very welcome, and dont forget to tell me how can i improve ^^



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  • Chris Yiu
  • Posted: 26 September 2008 11:01 PM

The apple scene was done with Art of Illusion,wasn’t it?



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Good catch Chris - look what I found:
apples.jpg



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  • Chris Yiu
  • Posted: 27 September 2008 02:58 AM

Yeah! Actually, I had seen it in the gallery of the art of illusion website. :)



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 27 September 2008 05:59 AM

I don’t actually remember finding it in the art of illusion website, i found it while surfing the web, so i actually liked it and I did the doughnut scene as a test,but....i failed :roll:
so i posted it in here so anyone could help me....

(and please comment on the other scenes i have posted :-)



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