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Hello, I’m currently attending a Game Art and Design program and would like feedback on my work so far.
Feel free to add any comments/critiques/criticisms. I’ve been having a bit of trouble progressing in school lately and need honest critiques and criticisms to help me succeed. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
Thanks!



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  • RedCobra
  • Posted: 19 March 2009 06:31 AM

Both models are really good.

-in the first model (the alien) you could add more detail on the body or hand...like if the alien was thin, you could make the skin a bit tight on the bones, so the bones shape would appear under the skin...and if the alien was fat, you could add some fat layers on the alien’s body or head.

-In the second model (the female) it is not smoothed properly, you could increase the number of iterations. And the ears look a bit weird...and the hair is too flat in this image...i guess texture and post production would fix that “flatness”.

Try posting another image of the same models but with texture...i bet they will look a hundred times better :-)

other than all that...great job :P



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