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This is a piece of 3d I've been working on for about a week or so. Still working on some of the lighting but here's what I got so far. Please comment.
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| Posted: Nov 06, 2009
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| Published by: pcmodeler777
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Users comments (3)
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| Posted by pcmodeler777 on Nov 08, 2009 at 11:53 PM
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| mentalRay
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| Posted by ezzy on Nov 08, 2009 at 05:28 AM
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hi
there is lots of noise at the scene, maybe you should increase the subdivision value of the reflection to fix it.
the tv looks like it got no screen but only frame.
the ies of the lights is too big and it looks it goes behind the tv(?).
the shadow of the vent+light is too big.
it seems the sofa is in the air.
thats all...good start
what render do you use?
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| Posted by Rhadamanthus on Nov 07, 2009 at 11:19 AM
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nice atmosphere..
Is it me or the TV is transparent? :D
here are a few notes:
-The reflections are a little bit too strong, you'd better turn them down, as well as the bump value.
-If you're using Arch&Design materials, use a map in the reflection color slot on the ground. Usually, the same bump map works well.
-Increase the sampling of the soft reflections
-The image lacks contact shadows, increase FG samples and use AO on the ground material
Nice job for a week :)
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